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Life trickles down,
tumbles down,
such tumultuous glory; basking ever in its image;
for itself and only is the wine;
and the devil downs the cup.
Ah, the fragrant gulp; how madness soars,
just over the scarlet skies the Gods call pain and we familiarity,
a fine night to sell to the highest bidder;
ah yes, why not bid yourself on any night not quite so divine as this?
He whispers, slithering, its fine, its fine;
just a price, no vice, no vice
the scream, how it caresses him, entices him for more,
it flows, it flows, trickling around him
bathe in the agony, the gift of the divinity
life is but a temporary thing;
surely eating just one more time can not be such a very bad thing;
all those begging to be devoured, who just don't know it yet.
Sadness tastes the best; love too saccharine,
all too often the tastes blurred, hazing his vision;
but hearts lay, waiting to be shattered at the sweet arrival of dawn.
His job was done; but he was still hungry.
Perhaps disappointment was a better meal?
Na, he'd settle for a big mac.
Shit, were on Earth were his keys?
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this is a poem about a demon living among us; with an unexpected shift at the end...
If any body does live in malbery lane; I tried to think of a lane name that wasn't real.
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:iconchristinefrollophile:
Awesomeness! Oh, I've still be reading your story over at FF.net, really enjoying that too. :)
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~Thorneborne Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
cool; you on the last part?
I think I'm going to post a new chapter sometime today.
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:iconchristinefrollophile:
I'm at ch. 25 already, I so need to find time for more reading. I try to a little at work sometimes when things quiet down. Are you going to be writing more villain stories like this? I find these kind of things really interesting. :aww:
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Mood: Affection ~Thorneborne Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm starting another large story; Camelot rising.
It's not really about the villain but makes Quest for Camelot darker like it was intended to be and gives more depth to the villian.
On the complete villain side of thingsI'm planning a Sadira oneshot.
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:iconchristinefrollophile:
Sadira from the Aladdin series? Oh, how cool! I always thought they should have shown her more, she's quite feisty and interesting. :aww:
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~Thorneborne Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The very same, and despite my ever changing fanfic priorites [creating and deleting sprees always popping up] it may even grow ino Sadira/Mozenrath.
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:iconchristinefrollophile:
Oh, cool, those two are an interesting pairing! I have friends that really like those two, I'll have to let them know to check this out. :)
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